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yv
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0 posted 2004-07-30 05:09 PM


They became of two stars from the
Same universe
Dripping love into the galaxies

With every strand of hair
With every deep look in the eyes
With every kiss of the lips

And as he sighed
Sipping her chocolate lips
He looked into her eyes
And said softly
In all of the sweetness of paradise

"Baby,
Everything is gonna be alright."

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

© Copyright 2004 Camiele - All Rights Reserved
dinky
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1 posted 2004-07-30 05:59 PM


beautifully written

"UH de nah nah nah..."

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-30 07:44 PM


They became of two stars from the
Same universe
Dripping love into the galaxies

Really enjoyed this.  Enjoyed the entire piece.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-07-30 07:47 PM


Love this...I'll be back...James
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2004-07-30 09:52 PM


Great!

Juju

IndigoEve
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5 posted 2004-08-03 11:58 AM


Oh, how I remember..

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-08-03 12:58 PM


yes...sigh
iliana
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7 posted 2004-08-03 01:27 PM


Big sigh......beautiful....jo
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california
8 posted 2004-08-03 01:53 PM


beautiful


Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-08-03 01:54 PM


Now I've got old tunes rumbling through my head.  Enjoyed this, very much!
elfine
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since 2004-06-08
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traveling
10 posted 2004-08-03 10:12 PM


we can almost taste this.  
Suetang
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11 posted 2004-08-03 11:28 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Camiele.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-08-04 12:52 PM


Riding the blue waves back to the top...James
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