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Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-07-30 11:45 AM



Would u love me
when I'm not myself

Take my hand when I
can not see,Hold me
when I can not breath

Dance with me under the stars
sail across the sea where
we can be far into our dreams

Eat silver coated candy
get lost in each others
eyes. Love me when I'm
old and love me when
I die.

I belive you would
your my angel from
the sky. Sent from
god himself to watch
me and to get me by.

My love I have for
you gets me to the
center of myself
and never gets me
blue.

November clouds sweep
over our faces our hands
touch sparks fly my soul
lifts up to a place where
I can just be divine.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-30 11:50 AM


Good request and reminder

I believe men quickly become annoyed with noise of any kind, where woman view the noise as a bonding or ironing out the wrinkles...(smile)

Thought and done very well.

Contabo
Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159

2 posted 2004-07-30 05:47 PM


Very nice write...

LeeJ, most men do not have their testoterone balanced with their estrogen.

Contabo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-08-01 04:27 AM


Nice...James
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2004-08-01 06:36 AM


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