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vandana
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0 posted 2004-07-30 10:57 AM


I know
Deep in my heart,
I love you
I miss you,
Iam missing you,
I bet
Even the sun don't come out,
Still be going home,
Still arrive on time,
Deep in my heart,
I know,
Iam missing you too much,
I will be going home (soon)
To see you,
I will be seeing you,
Soon,
I will the sun along,
To shine our dreams,
So I will thank you,
For everything you have done,
Lately,
Iam losing my mind,
As the wind blows,
On the west coast,
When I lost my heart,
On the way,
to home,
I keep singing
Till I get home,
I will be going home,
I will be coming soon,
To get your love,
Tonight.....


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Startime55
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1 posted 2004-07-30 10:59 AM


Heartbreakingly beautiful...you weave incredibly strong feelings with your words...this one brought tears to my eyes...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-07-30 11:00 AM


vandana
A beautiful message.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-07-30 11:00 AM


Very beautiful Vandana...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2004-07-30 11:02 AM


a perfect ending, Vandana
JL
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5 posted 2004-07-30 11:02 AM


Beautiful, is putting it mildly.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-07-30 11:28 AM


how precious
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-08-01 04:35 AM


Lovely...James
iliana
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8 posted 2004-08-01 04:36 AM


Nice, sounds like it would make a good song!   ......jo
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