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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Secrets Secrets molding times engage Hold the symbols of the age Passing through the field of dead Holding hands with newborn wed Rising through the mist of morn Making dew drops in the dawn Sending whispers fantasy To fill the sails of argosy But time distils a heady brew Intoxicating minds in view Sending shadows of a cast To dust and cover most of past And though we dig the grime of change To fix in time the range of strange Non-can fill the mot with water Anti time the true of order That is where semantics plays In the antics of our ways |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Reading you is like listening to a symphony thank you Morning Sy, Happy Friday  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thanks and a happy friday to you.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You weave with words beautifully Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! May you and yours have a fantastic summer weekend. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
fix the range of strange I can use that darn fine wrench master sy whoa my strange range is way big... may need a bigger one later enjoyed this capture |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sigh...teach me meter. I hear it when I read you... I lose it when I write me... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Seymour. Your daily writes amaze me. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Nancy, Thank you sweet.  Dark Stranger I'm sure it will be there for you. LOL Sunshine Your sun has its own meter. Chris, Thank you dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your poem sings with the wisdom of truth...Stunning read... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. Startime55 A stunning comment. Thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Passing through the field of dead Holding hands with newborn wed ================================ I cant keep it secret any longer... I adore your rhymes and symbols...  shhhhhhhhh ... dont tell anyone.  *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And I'm in love with a Moth. WWRS |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Anti Time, do they bottle that? Where can I order it? hehehe.... Enjoyed.....jo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, beautiful rhymes, Seymour. And, filled with so much wisdom. I've missed you, my friend. Hugs, Ethle |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
missed this earlier for having things to do today, but gald I came across it now |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana They are still trying to bottle it. LOL Ethle Thank you love. passing, Glad you got to read it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am going to start calling you "Syfucious" Hi Isabel, big hugs all around the family! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Whats the meaning of argosy? I liked your poem alot. Smiles (: Juju |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you sweety. Signed "Syfucious" Juju, Argosy is a ship, going somewhere. |
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