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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-07-30 06:45 AM






In my Perhaps

It is in the soft light
of tiffany lamp
meditation meets quiet,
reflection greets wisdom,
in my perhaps,
lies hope.

In my perhaps,
are many opportunities
as so many more possibilities
lie within,
many more so than just
maybe,

or even,
we’ll see.

A soft promise that
indicates kismet is just
around the corner,
where serenity awaits,
perchance it be today,
or in whim
of tomorrow’s fancy.

Perhaps seems more a pledge,
awaiting blood’s ties
to thoughtful reverence.

Perhaps
is akin to a slip stream
of expect,
awaiting with trust
that wishes shall be
fulfilled.

In my Perhaps
rests the underlying encouragement
that all things shall be
as ever was

and

if asked what aura
surrounds my perhaps,

trust me…

it is orb-hued green.

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-30 06:51 AM


I cannot tell you how this read spoke to me, and carried me all the way through with great peace of heart...thank you Sunshine, your a profit in disquise...beautiful inside as well as out.  Good Morning
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2 posted 2004-07-30 06:53 AM


Perhaps
is akin to a slip stream
of expect,
awaiting with trust
that wishes shall be
fulfilled.


Beautiful, Karilea......and so true
for me....
Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-07-30 07:50 AM


Sunshine
Green, the perfect color for perhaps.

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-07-30 08:28 AM


perhaps...

I need to remember perhaps.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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5 posted 2004-07-30 08:38 AM


found a perhaps lamp
by the sea
rubbed it with a maybe cloth
and out came the magic
of a lazy genie

sorry sun...had to...
hope is a comfy bench
with friendly pillows
and unread saturday evening posts

enjoyed this

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6 posted 2004-07-30 08:41 AM


Yes..perhaps, kismet is just around the corner.
Love it love it love it!!!!!
What a piece to read first thing this Friday morn.
Love ya lady~

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7 posted 2004-07-30 08:41 AM


Karilea,
   Magnificient.  Your inner beauty radiates through your poem.  You captured me with the first verse only to treat me to more wonder.  You are one super lady, Karilea.  I so enjoy reading your poetry.  Reflection and melody become one.
                
  Just the beginning, but more wonder to follow:
        "It is in the soft light
        of tiffany lamp
        meditation meets quiet,
        reflection greets wisdom,
        in my perhaps,
        lies hope"

A keeper indeedy,
            ~misc'e

            


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8 posted 2004-07-30 09:50 AM


I think that this gem just might be my new favourite from you Karilea!
Library bound it is.
kismet indeed~
hugs, Chrislane

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9 posted 2004-07-30 10:57 AM


And the aura of this write, to me… Is wonderful.
Good one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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10 posted 2004-07-30 10:57 AM


nice
Startime55
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11 posted 2004-07-30 11:03 AM


In your perhaps flows such a gently touch that sooths the soul....Magnificent...

Martie
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12 posted 2004-07-30 02:21 PM


Karilea

You are so lovely in perhaps and many other words!  

Susan
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13 posted 2004-07-30 02:35 PM


Ah, you've given me a new perspective on perhaps.  Much enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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14 posted 2004-07-30 05:43 PM


Thank you, Karilea. This was an encouragement to me today.

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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15 posted 2004-07-30 06:09 PM


in my perhaps,
lies hope.


yes, yes indeed. Hope lies in my perhaps too.

Wonderful Karilea.

I've missed reading you.

HUGS

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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16 posted 2004-07-31 12:43 PM


This is absolutely slendiferous! I love your way with words!

What pulled me in here to read? Why the very name of the author because every time I read your work I am left in awe

What am I taking away? A very huge smile

iliana
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17 posted 2004-07-31 02:46 AM


Perhaps, this poem touches me so deeply it sets me dreaming......... loved it, Karilea.   your SIL
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18 posted 2004-07-31 04:26 AM


those tiffany lamps do wonders
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19 posted 2004-08-01 04:51 AM


Perhaps...James
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20 posted 2004-08-01 08:48 AM


Karilea...Just wonderful and so tender.
Perhaps another one very soon. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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