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0 posted 2004-07-30 06:44 AM



Blue Clouds Of November
By Ethel_GG_Kent

~~*~~
Somewhere in the inbetween
of awake and in our dreams
Is a place far, far away
where are stars and bright moon beams

A place that is filled with wonder
far away up in the sky
There is made known our fantasies
where we ask not the reasons why

A land where dreams are reality
and the unknown we become to know
Where all the trials of the awake
are made never, ever to flow

There is a milky way of stars
upon which we can ride
To fly across the sky so high
as we are forever side by side

There is always joy and contentment there
which we feel within our heart
Together in our castle of our minds
where we never will again be apart
~~*~~




© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-30 06:46 AM


Welcome home little one...
you've been missed!

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2 posted 2004-07-30 06:49 AM


Hello SunshineyOne!!
It's good to be home!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-07-30 06:54 AM


and you are joy

A land where dreams are reality
and the unknown we become to know
Where all the trials of the awake
are made never, ever to flow

very astute woman you are...enjoyed this very much.

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4 posted 2004-07-30 06:58 AM


Thank you, LeeJ. I'm glad
that you liked it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-07-30 08:12 AM


wonderfully expressed Ethel , that somewhere inbetween ....I am often there too .....

There is always joy and contentment there
which we feel within our heart
Together in our castle of our minds
where we never will again be apart

Hope

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6 posted 2004-07-30 08:38 AM


Ethel...you have been missed and I was so worried about you!
I'm so glad to see you back home.
And with such a lovely poem.
~Heart hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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7 posted 2004-07-30 08:53 AM


It's great to see you back, Ethel!  Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful gift!
(Actually, I could have copied the whole poem...)

Somewhere in the inbetween
of awake and in our dreams
Is a place far, far away
where are stars and bright moon beams

A place that is filled with wonder
far away up in the sky
There is made known our fantasies
where we ask not the reasons why

           miscellanea

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8 posted 2004-07-30 09:09 AM


How nice it is to read you again. And what a lovely piece, I want to go there sounds great

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

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9 posted 2004-07-30 09:53 AM


Beautiful Ethel Mae. I echo the others in saying that yes, you have been missed!
hugs, Chrislane

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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10 posted 2004-07-30 10:33 AM


nice to read you again ma'am
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11 posted 2004-07-30 10:40 AM


nice read
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12 posted 2004-07-30 10:48 AM


I travel that trail daily and you describe it perfectly...A beautiful vision to behold....I love it...

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13 posted 2004-07-30 10:54 AM


Ethel,
A delight to read you again.

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14 posted 2004-08-03 04:34 PM




(smiles) And your heart floods and beams of this special in-between land, sweet friend, may both your awake and dreaming states be filled with endless joys of love and happiness, yay! (ksis on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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15 posted 2004-08-03 04:39 PM


"Somewhere ..." is a magical place and your beautiful words prove that you know it well ...
Hi dear Ethel!
Love and hugs. Margherita

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16 posted 2004-08-03 08:10 PM


for this lovely, Ethel!   ...jo
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17 posted 2004-08-03 09:07 PM


and I call it the nouneless place...

why think like me?  I'm trying to think differently than I do...

just write like you!

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18 posted 2004-08-04 12:54 PM


Nice writing...James
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19 posted 2004-08-04 03:54 PM


There is always joy and contentment there
which we feel within our heart
Together in our castle of our minds
where we never will again be apart

How very lovely. *S* Welcome back, dear lady! *S*

Susan Caldwell
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20 posted 2004-08-04 03:59 PM


You know what Ethel?

I don't see you around here as much..

and I miss you!

This piece was superb!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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21 posted 2004-08-05 02:18 AM


Thank you all so very much, very much, my
sweet friends. You are all very much appreciated.
With love and heart hugs,

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