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A walk down memory lane ... For Lone Wolf (wherever you are)
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A walk down memory lane ... For Lone Wolf (wherever you are) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Hi All! I was looking back over the poems I've written in the past few years and came across this one that Lone Wolf and I wrote together. Jenn, wherever you are I hope the sun is shining brightly upon your beautiful heart  Thank you for always making time to write with me way back then. Love ya sis!This poem is rendered in the voices of two people. "Good-bye" Man: Saying good-bye is never easy But you know I've gotta go I never meant to hurt you And I want you to know Every time I hear our song I'll always think of us You deserve so much more My love is not enough Woman: No matter how hard I tried I couldn't make you see Would've given the world to you If only it was meant to be I want you to know this much Wouldn't trade one single day Although the pain is great I really have to say Man: We both came into this With visions of growing old Still clinging to each other's hearts How did it grow so cold? We had planned a life together Never dreamed that it would end Nothing left to hold onto now There's no use trying to pretend Woman: I'll never forget that warm day When you and I first met The sun reflected in your eyes And now that sun has set Even though this is over I hope that you know A part of me is with you Wherever you may go Both: How does one get over A love that once was true How does one say "good-bye" To a love the likes of you Maybe one day I'll find myself Falling in love again 'Till then I'll have the memory Of the life that we had planned [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (07-29-2004 07:05 PM).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...I remember this piece and like it as well today as I did then  |
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elfine Junior Member
since 2004-06-08
Posts 35traveling |
I like the effect of the duet ... and the way each voice is "torn" in remembrance and hope. Thank you for welcoming me to Passions! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Ahhhhhhh ... as lovely as I remember it~ Hoping our Lone Wolf will return to us~ Surely this will call her 'home'~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks guys errrr .... girls! I really miss my writing partner, hope she sees this |
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