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Martie
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0 posted 2004-07-29 05:53 PM



I know that to fly
only needs the sky within
and belief in wing

[This message has been edited by Martie (07-29-2004 06:48 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-29 06:04 PM


yes

faith ma'am.. always faith

James_A_Fraser
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2 posted 2004-07-29 06:42 PM


Faith, and the knowledge that you are worthy of flight.....


.....but that's never in question, with you.



~~J

JL
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3 posted 2004-07-29 06:45 PM


First, I see it in my mind.
Then I have the strength in my heart to try…

You have written a lot of meaning into a very short verse.
Beautiful!!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-07-29 07:35 PM


"I know that to fly
only needs the sky within
and belief in wing"

~ May your sky spirit forever soar!

Love & Light,
Linda


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5 posted 2004-07-29 08:38 PM


MartieSis~
You are so beautifully gifted~
I love you to pieces~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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elfine
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6 posted 2004-07-29 08:39 PM


"belief in wing" ... beautiful, and as simple as faith itself!  Thank you for welcoming me to Passions!  
Magnus
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7 posted 2004-07-29 10:25 PM


So very very true....well said Martie...
Hugs to ya....keep the faith...some day
you will fly...

Enchantress
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8 posted 2004-07-29 10:29 PM


Beautiful Martie...
You always come up with the perfect words.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

kayjay
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9 posted 2004-07-29 10:51 PM


Nice job!  You have great word selection skills.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Sunshine
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10 posted 2004-07-29 11:06 PM


Wing commands some height
Even dreams fly night
Soon enough, dawn lights

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11 posted 2004-07-30 12:27 PM


So very true, Martie.  We've just got to be careful of outside influences that so many times try to clip our "belief in wing" ... but I know you'll always fly.
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12 posted 2004-07-30 09:54 AM


Martie - my thoughts and energy are with you and Taylor - Paul
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13 posted 2004-07-30 09:58 AM


It isn't faith that allows you to take the leap.

Faith is the leap.

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Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2004-07-30 10:02 AM


nuff said ms Martie

you made it to the edge
and it is not so high now

enjoyed this view of you

Dark Angel
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15 posted 2004-07-30 06:14 PM


Perfectly said Martie.

Hugs, to you and Taylor.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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