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the aura |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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The aura I see surrounding yonder Peace olive tree has weakened to the point of near invisibility. Its branches appear to disappear in a darkened mist of hate. Is my once keen eyesight failing? It may be that I need to seek a higher wattage. * a rewrite that begged to see the light of day again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, this did beg to see the light of day again! ~ and your eyesight is not failing, Dear Kacy. You see only too well!  EA |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! I didn’t catch the original posting, but this version is great. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well.. they always did say I was the dimmest bulb.. so I'm guessing my wattage to be pretty low.. sometimes the very idea of peace itself seems impossible.. yet maybe if we all looked towards something brighter than ourselves.. we'd have more hope of finding it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ You word touch so elegantly~ Poignant penning poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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elfine Junior Member
since 2004-06-08
Posts 35traveling |
I was thinking about the way things look today, too ... you've reminded me that we look deeper to find a brighter light, to see more clearly. Thank you for this, and for welcoming me to Passions! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking each of you and Elfine, you are very welcome |
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