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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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..much like your hands, are my waves functioning without reason, merely to move. perpetual instinct to change, and holes are evolutionary... where your fingers caress me you create small diseases upon my flesh but I can forgive you for that... the symptoms are constantly changing, my war is mangled and sufficient but still... currently in a frozen state. Nothing could help my words to shape drowning and giving up on fighting to stay above the surface... the struggle is the hardest part, or so they say.. but you have chosen to make the outcome a struggle within itself.. but I can forgive you for that.. it's merely flesh. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Meghan...hugs... this tugs. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh boy oh boy have I missed you astounding write....how are you doing I want more, more more more.... smiles and hugs.... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
It may be "merely flesh" but this goes wayyyyyyyyy deeper than that. |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
I like this.....very much. Contabo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ouch....but fine writing. Can you forgive the holes made in other places? Great poem, one that leaves one pondering.  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I had your strength |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're becoming quite the keeper... well, that is, I'm keeping YOUR stuff.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your words stick....above and beneath flesh |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Megan I have enjoyed your poetry since the first day I found it here, and watch for you because I know I have got something great to read and think about in your work. Now, I have to tell you I can't wait to see another side of you emerge with the birth that is going to happen soon. This is going to take your poetry to an entirely new level. I am sure a lot of us await your delivery, and in it, if you are any thing like any other mother over time, it is also deliverance. Excellent writing. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Once again....wow! Eric |
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