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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-07-29 10:39 AM


Bridging probable
Our marketplace of understand
Receiving feedback, while powers of small
Grow long diverse arms
Drifting off in immediate
Behavior
We’ve never had the language around it
Until now
Nebulous pursuit of true opinions
Initiatives, playing hide and seek, given conversation
Radio waves surround us with mircro-messages
Persuasive to discern
Sparking creativity
Taking unique diversity down to
How we treat each other
Day to day implications of words
The craft of patterns
With striking features
Yours!
We swim in enthusiasm
Buying –in on subconscious messages


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-07-29 10:45 AM


LeeJ
And the best is subliminal. LOL enjoyed.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-07-29 06:58 PM


"We swim in enthusiasm
Buying –in on subconscious messages"

Profound.  But then again, you never miss.

Enjoyed this very much.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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