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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Sweet pleasures froth now echoes Like cool reflections, hearing mirrors calm Gracing mundane, giving wings complexion Airborne, mother’s family songs! Bouncing up and down, like rhythm of water Swaying bridge with no expectations, but breeze The dream womb of alive Kind, smirk of one who believes Telling me to dream again of him So I do, once more, his face not clear But sure…standing before him in silence He points me to beyond He is the child I learned to love The silence in respect He is what need releases In secret knowledge Powerful man hood self containing He had been there, on the horizon since five Announcing things between us, I’ve heard his voice With comfortable words…forests of memory Taking us places where leaves have not fallen Painted like coral, folding our hands in love’s organic lips Where moist breezes stir or’r exotic seas Like the mist of dance, touching our shoulders Soft, warm meanings, we need touch and understand Beloved is the face I’ve seen, Returning with odors of living blood Drinking from the chalice of the moon With wings of desire, baptizing like wine Hot blooded spirit drug, my feather on skin I trickle in the palm of our hands Where my green eyes sleep In the wet flesh of your voice Of Northern Lights... Within His chorus I stammer and quiver |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ I can only find one word Exquisite!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ok sis...the traffic cop at harbor drive and hiway 1?..told you he would pull you over..(grin) this is neptune's net LeeJ, all of the bounty and eyes walking too enjoyed this much |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
And this is indeed a treasure to read! Wonderful write Lee J. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Drinking from the chalice of the moon With wings of desire, baptizing like wine" ~ Two of my favourite lines in this fabulous write!  Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sea Treasures will be buried within the shelves of my library! Magnificient writing, Lee J. The rhythm,melody, and imagery of your words gently flowed into my imagination... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ YOU are the treasure~ Thank you for being such a gifted sharer of words~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderfully written Lee... I had treasures on my mind tonight...and just read one~~ Thank you for sharing your beautiful images. M |
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