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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2004-07-29 08:15 AM




she sat alone at bogie's
had her own space by the curb
letting her jets cool she said
gettin some air
enjoying the distance
from any man with hands

she was chrome and silicone
a jesse james ten with extras
breast dressed test
of the stutter
with too much leg
to be accidental

she recognized my leather
didn't seem to mind
almost a jack daniels yawn
with tequila in the eyes
she was a pro with the know how
and some high dollar easy

we spent some time dimes
more than I could afford
did the things of dreams
she knew how to move fast
but pretended it was me
and that she hadn't before

I said she felt good
she said she knew
and that I was ok too
and she could kill me
if I wanted to go that way
I said I might hang on

at least til the morning
______________
Dark


scribble note; wait..don't move it sunshine..it is a motorcycle...(grin)



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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-07-29 08:33 AM


darn, what a smile you gave this morning Dark....

maybe it just needs a good spin balance??  grinzzz

but didya have to remind me of the tequilla thing???

Good morning

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-07-29 08:41 AM


Dark Stranger
It's all in the mount and balance. LOL

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-07-29 09:03 AM


....and she talks....

ROFL....


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2004-07-29 09:15 AM


exceptional smiles this morning, I like her MO

extraordinary smiles at this one...thank you for the hazelnut coffee.  Reading you is like watching fireworks on the 4th of July!

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-07-29 10:24 AM


she was chrome and silicone
a jesse james ten with extras
breast dressed test
of the stutter
with too much leg
to be accidental

Ha!  I knew this was a machine.  Ah yes, much enjoyed.  I love seeing your name for I know I'm in for a treat.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
6 posted 2004-07-29 10:36 AM


HA!!! I knew it!!!

Men DO love their toys more!!!

grrrrrrrrrr

DS~ Yet another marvelous penning...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

7 posted 2004-07-29 10:20 PM


Now, would this be the one with the two velocity stacks
housed in a massive air box
that allows it to breathe aggressively?

Can you show us a picture?

[This message has been edited by Kahlil (07-30-2004 01:41 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2004-07-30 09:03 AM


Thanks to you all, dang motorcycles just hook me up ya know..

Ms Kahlil, no no pics...it was invisible too that is why I ended up with it..grin..


Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2004-07-30 10:58 AM


giggling here
visualizing you riding with a big smile, up the coast
one of my faves from you

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-07-30 06:12 PM


I love it!

I want that motorcycle..heh.

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Martie
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11 posted 2004-07-30 07:39 PM


DS

Very cute, and provacative with a twist.  Enjoyed you here!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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12 posted 2004-07-30 09:37 PM


she sat alone at bogie's
had her own space by the curb
letting her jets cool she said
gettin some air
enjoying the distance
from any man with hands

she was chrome and silicone
a jesse james ten with extras
breast dressed test
of the stutter
with too much leg
to be accidental
================================


*smiling* ... only you could have wrote this...
such a unique perspective thru your muse eyes.

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