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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Undressed Altars of stone by Gilgamesh Chiseled by bone and helped by flesh Symbols of a past in climb Diminished by the rasp of time. Slowly turning into dust Just as turns our human lust Changing into different form Each in truth a newer norm Through the neck the sands do fly The multitude in sounds of sigh Tumbling into evermore Each different than it was before In the scurry of the flair Lies the worry of the fare Kicking, screaming, to be born In the coming of the dawn Make way, make way for change to blend It weaves the pattern end to end |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wondering where we'd be without change quit boring I would think? you have a unique way of naming time Wonderful read, as always Thanks a bunch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A good point, good morning sweet.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
master sy.... like the sun undresses the sky to reveal a new eye day erasing the permanent seems to bring hope kewl stuff guy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Change is good Sey. Enjoyed your morning thoughts.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, It is for the new eye day we make way. LOL Gentle Spirit Enjoyed your read. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Change is the spice of life Sy. And your words ring with wisdom. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio May your way be gentle and smooth. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Change can be a good thing eh, Sy? Oh my Canadianism is showing this morn. Have a wonderful day Sy.  ~Smiles, Hugs & Morning tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You and your tea are a delight.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Altars of stone by Gilgamesh Chiseled by bone and helped by flesh Symbols of a past in climb Diminished by the rasp of time. Slowly turning into dust Just as turns our human lust Changing into different form Each in truth a newer norm Through the neck the sands do fly The multitude in sounds of sigh ================================== How many times...how many ways can I find to say... YOU ARE SO COOL!!!!!!!!!! That first verse alone is so full of metaphorically awesome intend that Im giddy...what you do with symbols is just too cool for school.  Through the neck the sands do fly The multitude in sounds of sigh see what I mean ....... Rock and rhyme on our poetic prophet...you da poet man. *ww*  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Altars of stone by Gilgamesh Chiseled by bone and helped by flesh Symbols of a past in climb Diminished by the rasp of time. nee... Monuments of ghostly past hammered of stone and shadow's cast cymbals clang throughout in rhyme sharpened by the seeker's chime...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the moth that makes me sigh By placing mirrors to my eye. And what I see makes the tea And makes me sigh the look of me. WWRS |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Changing into different form Each in truth a newer norm" Very true...and norm becomes old...and change bears on stasis and triggers new change...and around and around and around we go... Thanks! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are the light of my write. icebox Yes my friend and around and around and around we go... LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your words so true are each day new!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Yes and no. |
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