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Open Poetry #33
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2004-07-29 04:06 AM


Knots

frayed behind you I walk  
and I want to scream
turn around and look at me
I am the woman
the one in which you seek
but you step on ahead
to another dreamless night
surrounded unseamed dark
moments raveling undone
to threads so barely hanging
and I watch you …go
pulling myself knotted

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-07-29 04:16 AM

Great analogy.   ...jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-07-29 04:23 AM

let him step, girl! If he's that blind, then you don't need him
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