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My Lightening Rod
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My Lightening Rod |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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The world’s strongest woman Is from Ohio. She lives back a lane Where rare trees grow. And she’s like the pear tree, That unique special one, Which was struck by lightening. We thought it was done. But one of its branches Had fallen to ground And from it some saplings, Four now abound. It is symbolic but yet it is true, Four were her children Me, brother, sisters two. This strong woman Carried the weight Of a ton on her back, Or more than that. She’s an angel on Earth This I know. Her hair, now silver gray, Twinkles halo. 81 years and she’s still growing Stronger each day. Her wisdom is showing. Oh, the times she has seen! She has been different things. But I know her as Mom, My Lightening Rod and The strongest woman I've ever known. Mom, I wrote this poem, its true, Just to say “love you.” XOXOXO, jo [This message has been edited by iliana (07-29-2004 06:41 PM).] |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
very charming, I liked the title and the reference to it. You have style similar to Sadelite, I like very much. C? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
C? Sadie and I are sisters (Cathy is my youngest sister). I didn't realize our style was similar, but I'm not surprised you see our common roots (pun intended). I might add that our father was a chemist....thought you'd like that. Thanks for the sweet comment.  ....jo |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
This is so sweet. I would love to get something like this from one of my daughters someday. I do have it pretty good though, my 4 year old made me a valentines day card yesterday with hearts and a chocolate rainbow  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
~K~ -- ummmmmm, chocolate! That's a great start! Thanks for your SWEET reply. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks, Dixie. *smile* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Jo, this was such a sweet, loving way of telling your Mom you love her!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful write that I am sure your mom is so ver proud of! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
81 years and she’s still growing Stronger each day. Her wisdom is showing. Oh, the times she has seen! She has been different things. But I know her as Mom, My Lightening Rod and The strongest woman I've ever known. they are indeed a marvel...are they not? This was a beauty, of which she should see...I think she'd be overwhelmed by it's beauty. Thank you for writing and sharing! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
She sounds like a very strong woman.. This is a wonderful way of letting her know how much you love her. Heart hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
jo, this is so filled with love, honor, and depth of feeling. What a beautiful gift. susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I know, I appreciate, I enjoy the poem, She is an amazing lady isn’t she Still bouncing back from anything. Gloom |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Jo. You are very lucky to have a mother like that. I often think of mine but as yet I can't quite define her. It will come to me in time as most things do. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a wonderful caring poem, Jo...my Mother just turned 80...hard to believe sometimes. Hugs M |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh how pretty! Juju |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Jo, I hope you gave this to her. She says she doesn't like poetry, but I think differently. I think it is our love of writing that came from listening to her read letters and memories she's written. On the surface, this woman seems so plain, but you and I know her complexity. Yes, she is the strongest woman I know! Probably, she's one of the strongest people, period. You know she'll be very humble about this and tell us how it isn't true!!! Our Mom! love, cathy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lily jo, your Mom sounds just like I picture you when you are 81 years young! Her strength, beauty and wisdom comes through the poetry of her own wonderful daughters! A lovely read. Made me smile and feel all fuzzy inside ~ and missing my own Mom! I think I'll give her a call ~ all those thousands of miles away! Give your Mom a big hug from me and keep one for yourself! Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful... I bet your Mom is proud! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jo...this is very touching..you are lucky to still have your mother around to be your lightening rod. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a wonderful write, you honor her nicely |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
A great tribute. iliana, I have my strongest woman too! Contabo |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this made me tear up as it is sooooooo beautiful, as I believe the love of every mother influences so much of our lives and is reflected on everyone else we love! (kiss on cheek) You are a lightning rod of warmth, friendship and delight, sweet friend, yay, God Bless you and your mom, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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