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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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pause for a moment letting go of the tick of clock linger- let the hands of existence embrace you listen- can you hear it? the pulse of life traveling the course of veins beating to passions count inhale the breath of the sublime expanding your universe transcending the known here . . . in this moment let go of time s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved it, Susan. Actually, I think that is what I end up doing everytime I log on to PIP (lol) -- I do lose track of time and it is another world! luv ya, sweet lady  ....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks jo. i agree, time seems to fade if not cease complete when wandering through the world of blue. hugs to you --  susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wandering....Nahhh, perhaps floating on a cloud... Love the feel of your words... such a soothing piece, one could go to sleep with this being spoken softly to them... I wonder if ...... Nahhh..... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Susan, Thanks for the lovely pause and capturing. misc'e |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully written Susan, thank you for transcending my mind within serenity..... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! I could hear the motion of your poem...Very well done.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan I do, I have, and thank you! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I am happy the peace of the piece whispered to you all, thank you for your replies. You gift me with warmth of spirit. Barry, you make me smile  Hugs to you all SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh this is nice...soothing. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I do that more times then not, and get into deep trouble for it...smiles and hugs Loved this read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Susan and LeeJ, I appreciate your replies Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Now this is a message for all to ponder. Wonderful write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, very much enjoyed this transcendental write!  Love & Light, Linda |
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elfine Junior Member
since 2004-06-08
Posts 35traveling |
Susan -- you make time stop, and it's amazing what one can hear in the space in between. Thank you for this, and for welcoming me to Passions! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ I watch your words glow .. growing with the grace of you~ You just get better and better~ Honest Injun~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all Marge, you're such a sweetie -- your compliment means a great deal -- honest injun Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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