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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-07-28 02:31 PM



Waxing

filling with joy
toward elation
giddy as filled
with sweet libation

summer moon
is on the rise
a drenching lights
the summer skies

a surprise to me
this lonesome tune
reality hits
its my blue moon

it’s rare indeed
this phenomenon
hence why do I
feel like a pawn

moved about
to another’s will
reflected in
the moonlight’s spill

since time and space
are not by chance
why must these steps
be blue moon dance

it’s man’s contrive
as calendar’s gauge
manipulates
the diarist’s page

for joy is felt
beneath full moon
when one per month
prompts crooner’s tune

yet not so now
end of July
a blue moon prompts
a crooner’s cry

©July 28, 2004


in case this info has passed you by, the 31st will be the 2nd full moon in this July, making it a blue moon

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-28 02:35 PM


Oh I just can't wait and now I have that old song "Blue Moon" playing over and over in my head!!
Excellent Virginia....a keeper for sure.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2004-07-28 02:39 PM


Love it...love it...deep feelings and vision...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-07-28 02:42 PM


oh goodness... I was not aware...

I need to hide.

Very nice write!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-07-28 02:52 PM


VAS
Elegant, enjoyed the read.

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-07-28 02:56 PM


Ah, blue moon, anything can happen once on a blue moon -- enjoyed this.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

6 posted 2004-07-28 04:16 PM


And the etymology of "blue moon" is  . . . ?
Well, darn, I've forgotten.
Why not "once in a green moon?

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