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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2004-07-28 08:23 AM



I stay to my corner,
watching,
waiting,
crying.

I don't know you.
I have read you.
I have seen the wonders of your painting.

Yet I never spoke a word to you.

The world that is yours
is familiar to me.
I know the pain of your family.

I wish you peace
and pain free days.

And I thank you,
for showing me unending, unconditional,
enduring, soul wrenching love.

Through who you are
and those that love you.

© Copyright 2004 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-07-28 08:38 AM


I'm most certain, this person(s) feel the same love & graditude in their souls for you
as in each of us, where would we be without the other?  

Tremendous smiles and warmth this one gives to the reader...thank you

Have a wonderful day

scorpio
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2 posted 2004-07-28 08:43 AM


A good reaching-out write.  May the distance between you close.

believe in what your heart feels...

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2004-07-28 08:50 AM


MS SC, friend with out sharing breath..the truest perhaps, this was warmhearthugyawithmyeyesclosed

enjoyed it

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-07-28 08:53 AM


Lovely warm write Susan...makes the reader feel so good.
Hugs sweet lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-07-28 09:46 AM


And I thank you,
for showing me unending, unconditional,
enduring, soul wrenching love.

so rare, but so blessed when we do receive this from another
thank you for sharing your thoughts

Susan
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6 posted 2004-07-28 10:27 AM


Lovely --

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2004-07-28 10:41 AM


susan, I am sure who this was written for is smiling...it most definately made me smile too.
thank you....

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8 posted 2004-07-28 12:55 PM


Lovely indeed Susan. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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9 posted 2004-07-28 12:56 PM


Susan, the person you wrote this for could not help but feel the same way.   ....jo
Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2004-07-28 01:17 PM


you know...I actually thought it was so clear who this was written for that I didn't think I needed to say...

But no...I think he is too ill to know...

Michael...

And thank you everyone for your kind replies.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Startime55
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11 posted 2004-07-28 02:16 PM


Tears flow freely reading the purity of the love you feel for Michael and his family....Heart wrenchingly beautiful...**hugs**

1slick_lady
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12 posted 2004-07-28 04:57 PM


susan how sweet you are...helen
Martie
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13 posted 2004-07-28 05:10 PM


Susan

I knew exactly who you were talking about and this is a lovely and loving gesture...so open hearted.  I applaud you!  

Cpat Hair
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14 posted 2004-07-28 06:13 PM


very nicely done Susan
nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2004-07-28 07:33 PM


I knew who this was for immediately, Susan...
a beautiful write

M

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16 posted 2004-07-28 09:48 PM


I figured it out also...the painting,  the
pain....never really knowing them...Yes,
many of us feel the same way of a man with
a huge heart...we love him too.

Thank You for expressing many of our own
feelings.

miscellanea
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17 posted 2004-07-28 09:58 PM


Susan,
    This is a beautiful poem and heart warming gesture.  
                 miscellanea

passing shadows
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18 posted 2004-07-29 04:26 AM


I needed a "feel good" one tonight
Susan Caldwell
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19 posted 2004-07-29 10:42 AM


Thank you all!

I don't know Michael but I sit back, completely amazed at the love and devotion between him and his wife and him and our pip members.  

May we all be so lucky in love.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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