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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Amber glowing consciousness nestles In the drift harmony, carving one meager dimple Leaving blank pages for prophets, of the intuitive child Free-lancing comes counting blessings… One by one, they stockpile No greater beauty fuses, stronger certainty Heaven’s stars, slow-stepping marks of luminaries, Warmly smiling trails of liquid moon amaretto Pouring out symphonies, for all who care to know Tender mercies unfolding great wings To a familiar touch, like an embodied hymn Things romancing coastal frontiers With passions of curious stares Things, others might view trite or simple Always there…. A place where your smiles envelop Like the promise from a maestro Upon radiant melody Hereby a night, velvet quivers full blown larvae Clothed in soft candle glows, wonderment sizzles With all mystery in full view painting social “Could We”? I request, “Glide the middle of day”? Bridging gaps of time, holding stars in our essay? Wishing on sunsets, spilling colorful paint chips All over friendships Some great language whispers subtle music to all Where the womb of our journey stirs, rubs its eyes while Tenderly waking up |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Some great language whispers subtle music to all" ~ May I use your own words to describe your writing?!? Have a fantabulous day! Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms L'J..seems a boat perhaps with it's own private ocean plenty of room to dance enjoyed the permission here |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"“Could We”? I request, “Glide the middle of day”? Bridging gaps of time, holding stars in our essay? Wishing on sunsets, spilling colorful paint chips All over friendships Some great language whispers subtle music to all Where the womb of our journey stirs, rubs its eyes while Tenderly waking up" Lee, this is one of the most beautiful passages I have ever read!! Please don't ever stop writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'Where the womb of our journey stirs' You have an abundance or originality in your inking well~ I stand in awe~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Elegance has its day, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "Tender mercies unfolding great wings To a familiar touch, like an embodied hymn Things romancing coastal frontiers With passions of curious stares Things, others might view trite or simple Always there…. A place where your smiles envelop" You have such an amazing way with words! |
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