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Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2004-07-28 03:09 AM



Rocketman

Rocketman
take me close in hand
send me reeling
through your stars
slip-sliding galaxies
of pleasure
on cosmic waves
of love,
planet skipping
on our passion ride
till I surrender
to your gravity
and fall into the universe
of your eyes locked to mine
for the turbulance
of that final descent.


© Copyright 2004 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-07-28 03:50 AM


okay now you got me singing Elton John
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-28 10:36 AM


Like this a lot -- a lot!

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-07-28 10:49 AM


Very very nice....much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-07-28 11:02 AM


darn, I'll be hearin that song the rest of the day now...

hey, it's ok, cause you've given me the greatest cause to do so....your insightful poetic words....look out Elton John!

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-07-28 11:30 AM


what a rocket to ride huh?  enjoyed this much, thanks for a smile.
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6 posted 2004-07-28 01:18 PM


Beki~

'till I surrender
to your gravity'


Oh girl ...
what
a
fun way
to
f
  a
    l
      l~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2004-07-28 02:00 PM


WOW!!! What a wonderful way to put it...filled with passion...I love it..

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
8 posted 2004-07-29 12:20 PM


thanks everyone, I just wrote this quickly in response to something my special guy said totease me...but it is fun..I am glad you all enjoyed it.
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