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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-07-28 12:49 PM


Together Now

I told her I missed
her so much when
we were apart
that I thought
I would cry.
She said she loved
me and not to worry,
everything would
be allright.
I take her at her word.
I'll learn to believe somehow,
for better or for worse
we're together now.

JamesLee
July21
2004

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-28 01:26 AM


Oh, JamesLee, I like this.  I'm so happy for you.   ...jo
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2 posted 2004-07-28 02:49 AM


nice write of the lingering insecurities one must still grapple with even when s/he feels that happiness is within her/his grasp.
passing shadows
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