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lgina
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since 2004-07-20
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0 posted 2004-07-28 12:46 PM



Crippled by the fear of knowing what's to come.

The answeres are written before the questions are ever asked.

Walking through to the other side, but never moving forward.

Silence is so loud you cover your ears yet you hear exactly what is said.

Spoken to you for only a moment, but you know what to do.


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wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
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on the way to next world
1 posted 2004-07-28 12:50 PM


you can continue here, or leave it as is...
some good thoughts here


iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-28 01:20 AM


Very interesting, but I am wanting more, too. You've left me with a little mystery.   ....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-07-28 04:19 AM


the answers are written, yes
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-28 08:33 PM


i'm with jo, i'm listening, but not quite hearing what is being said.  this has a very lonely and almost hopeless feel to it.  there is always hope, always.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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