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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2004-07-27 05:02 PM


Steal the palatte of a sunset from a watercolor sky,
to infuse these words found wanting for a share of such a sight,
that those hues impart a glimmer from the murk of this twilight.

Where is indigo, flush crimson, let it bleed agaist the blue,
lending shades of new perspective to the framework of these lines,
'til is made a seamless piece in which the two have been combined.

That might look upon ones' work and take delight in it as well,
having swirled some slight reflection in those phrases to disclose,
that two worlds upon each other are at times super-imposed.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-27-2004 09:57 PM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-07-27 05:48 PM


OMG, I am keeping this one. my kinda canvas-scene
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-07-27 05:56 PM


Dr.Moose1
Well done, enjoyed.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-27 08:39 PM


eeeeeeee......BRAVO, BRAVO, Dr. Moose!   .....jo
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