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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-27 11:20 AM



Wordless...

We speak in subtle
gestures.

While our flesh responds with a
language of its own.

Listen to the wind moan its
pleasure to the night.

Watch...as the world parts to the
stir of this caress.

We are at once the wind...and the
world that shivers in delight.

In the absence of
words...

We speak the language of
the night.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-27 11:23 AM


"Watch...as the world parts to the
stir of this caress.

We are at once the wind...and the
world that shivers in delight.

In the absence of
words...

We speak the language of
the night."

So very very soft and beautiful Eric!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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2 posted 2004-07-27 12:45 PM


I suppose having no words is a good thing sometimes
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-07-27 12:49 PM


WOW! Just plain wow.
Another beautiful keeper.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-07-27 01:12 PM


I loved this write best of all...
Superb!
TD

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with you
5 posted 2004-07-27 01:31 PM


every single time *goose bumps*
every single poem *sigh*
you rock....

Susan
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6 posted 2004-07-27 02:31 PM


Mmmmm, mmmm, mmmmm.

  Susan

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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-07-27 02:33 PM


Ericc
Excellent my friend.

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8 posted 2004-07-27 07:37 PM


enjoyed this much
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2004-07-27 07:41 PM



Repost this on December 21...or whatever night is the longest night of the year...

Margherita
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10 posted 2004-08-02 11:40 AM


In the absence of words, the emotions unfold in all their power, beyond definitions, limitlessly, globally …….. we become everything.
…….. but I wouldn’t want to miss your incredibly impressive words. They convey wondrous truths in such a unique way!
Blessed be you and your words!
Dear Eric, I love you.
Margherita

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11 posted 2004-08-02 11:50 AM


ah if only my walls that protect so adequately did not keep out the 'wind' as well...sigh.....wonderful write
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