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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2004-07-27 04:46 AM


We move, we do, we are.
You and i are the future,
alike as twins, i love you.
Share everything within this world.

Lay with me, looking at the
clouds lazily meander by.
Thermo nuclear clouds will
burst above us, but never break us.

This modern world holds no
fears for me, i will eat and
feed off it.My brain and steel
trap mind cannot be beaten.

Thosuands may die of starvation and even
more get richer, so long as i
have a cause to fight, an injustice
to put right, my happiness is assured.

All the hypocrites who profess
to care, i will show them for
what they are, fake.
Babies die, but a new SUV is important.

Following leaders who need to
be relieved of duty in the field.
Shell shocked, pack them away
to convalesce behind their walls of blood money.

My love beats all, it is just
not selfish, my love is for one,
the world can go to blazes
in the ultimate act of judgement.

Give your heart, give your soul
to the one you love, while time allows.
The poor may feed off my love flesh
until their strength returns.

My heart is love for the people of
compassion, for the people who
realy care, for i love the downtrodden
not the poor little rich folk.

The gulf between rich and poor gets wider......

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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2004-07-27 05:01 AM


Some need help far more than others.

*sigh*

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-07-27 05:04 AM


Love is the best gift of all, family, friends, all the riches in the world could not buy true happiness and love....

The rich seem to be the most unhappy for they hunger and never are they satisfied,

The poor are content and appreciative with what they have....and share more to help others, for they know what it is like to be in their shoes....

A very compassionate poem, full of wisdom from a loving heart....

It is true to spend the time with those you love while you can...life and love cannot be bought!

Love ARHxxxxxxxx

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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3 posted 2004-07-28 03:46 AM


you know I work at the gate of a golf course community with families who have $300,000 and $400,000 homes and fancy cars and spoiled kids...

there are many though that will reach out and are compassionate...take the time to stop and ask how my day is going...if I need anything...if I'm hungry...

and you wouldn't believe how many have big problems and great losses in life that they are dealing with and they never let on how sad they are...but I get them to take off the mask...that's why they love me I guess...I care about them.

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-07-28 07:27 AM


LOVE EVERYONE regardless of their circumstance.

never begrudge a person just because they have money, i know plenty of people who are poor and do nothing but sit on their backside and complain.

there are ALL types out there...love them all...embrace everything no matter what it is...

in the end, the only thing we can change is OURSELVES.


and of course, give extra special love to those you want nearest to you...but you know that already!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-07-28 07:40 AM


Through reading your poetry, I have come to know you as a man of integrity and compassion ~ and passion! lol

Love for your fellow man and our planet, give added dimension to your illustrious writes.

Love, Peace & Harmony,
EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-07-28 09:45 AM


yes, love is the key, but to drop human conditioning and love unconditionally is another key to an grand open door...we humans have to stop fighting...go beyond trying to control...and figure out together as a team, to do what is best...in that we to must sometimes loose, allow others to try their ideas...we can't always win or force our opinions and beliefs....I see this happening so very much lately, and the anger scares me...this business of complete radical left and right is dangerous and scares me.  

Love is the key, but is not made up of one word, but of many, and I hope mankind will figure it out...God bless you and yours...
thank you for sharing.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-07-29 01:37 AM


You do have so much to give -- enjoyed!   ....jo
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