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~K~
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0 posted 2004-07-27 03:12 AM


The years dissolve
in Chronos' grasp
transforming youth
to fertile ash;
a gallant wind
collects and spreads
along the paths
we used to tread.

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-27 03:14 AM


wow ~K~

this is awesome!

Welcome to Passions!

iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-27 03:19 AM


Welcome to Passions, ~K~!  I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to many more.
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3 posted 2004-07-27 07:02 AM


good grief! you know how to stuff a powerhouse of emotion into a few lines.

enjoyed this

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-07-27 07:30 AM


~K~, Welcome to Passions.  We hope you find our little poet's home to suit each and every fancy of write.


LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-07-27 09:06 AM


awesome write, and welcome to PIP!

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-07-27 09:13 AM


Wonderful write!
Welcome to Passions!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-07-27 09:42 AM


Hi, K! Have you ever tried your hand at a Hi, Q?!? (Haiku) Ooops! I'm making a very poor first impression! lol

On a more serious note, I welcome you to our poetic family with open wings! Oh, oh! There I go again!

You certainly said a mouthful in a few words! A fine debut!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Love & Light,
Earth Angel


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8 posted 2004-07-27 08:04 PM


~K~,
Me thinks you know of life's sorrow. And it seems they have taught you well. Welcome to PiPs. Hope all is well.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2004-07-27 08:50 PM


Well done, ~K~, looking forward to reading more of you!

Welcome!

~tier

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-07-27 10:22 PM


Enjoyed your first post very much.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

~K~
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11 posted 2004-07-27 11:57 PM


Thank you all so much for the warm & wonderful welcome. I look forward to reading all of your poetry. I have 2 small children so I don't have a lot of time but I will try to comment as much as I can.

Earth Angel~ I have written several haiku's but I'm afraid I break all the haiku rules :S
maybe I will post some later though.

Thanks again everyone!

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