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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-07-27 01:15 AM





image by: pamela hanson

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-27 01:37 AM


"press tomorrow into my eyes....and kiss me into us."  

WOW times many, many explanation points!  These lines, so equisitely tender with the photo....Snow, I hold my breath when I read you.  love you, jo

iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-27 02:00 AM


Pure Snow, I just wanted to come back here and make sure I clicked my libary button this time (not sure if I did or didn't)... As to your recent post on my poem, I just want to say...that....I treasure your comment.  *hugs*
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-07-27 02:56 AM


damn!
CMGrimm
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4 posted 2004-07-27 07:05 AM


do you have any idea how frustrating it is to read your work?

lol

love it

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



CMGrimm
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5 posted 2004-07-27 07:06 AM


Yet... for some reason i come back time and time again... its like im addicted or something...

lol

again... love it

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



CMGrimm
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6 posted 2004-07-27 05:51 PM


by frustrating i meant that i wish i could write like that...not that i couldnt read it...lol...just clarifying.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2004-07-28 02:51 AM


This my love is truly wonderful. Oh my! Now how the heck am I suppose to write something worthy of your eyes when you have just penned perfection? Would you mind lowering the bar a little bit so the rest of us get climb over? LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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