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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-07-26 10:30 PM





Why take the shame?
When there's always,
someone to blame.

Why should you pay?
All you wanted
was to go play!

Oh and well she,
she coudn't see
or grasp realty
you broke her will..
more than may be...

And now she hates
EVERYTHING
even herself!
because of you.

society,
doesn't debate
but stands by you,
and say its fate
with all poeple.......
poeple like herself
but don't you see
she's just a girl!


but no not you
not the one star
your not at fault
even if she's gone
and defenceless
she shares the blame

so what you clame...
But I know you...
YOU BEING just.....
no different
Then those in jail
The ten percent
that stalk the streets
In cold dark nights
with knives and guns

Only just that
your weopon was
the alcohole
you laced for her.


Juju

Just mad at the world again--------- Cause I have to live in it. Dedicated to the poeple who think they can get away with hurting poeple  


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-07-26 10:33 PM


keep that pen busy, juju
a good vent

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-07-26 10:46 PM


That was my nick name in my sofemore year in high school.....

just a thought thanx for responding.

Juju

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-07-27 12:43 PM


Nice writing...James
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2004-07-27 09:01 PM


thankyou James

Juju

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