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Storms Reflection
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Storms Reflection Menacing clouds roll closer building in size as blue skies dwindle and birds fly to safety Heavy laden with power and black as ink the sky awaits in an unearthly silence A streak of lightning leaves a trail of brilliance that can not be captured by photo or paint Thunder gains volume vibrating off the soul and we wait the fury of the coming storm Again lightning flashes leaving jagged marks illuminating a man and woman’s form Standing in shelter protected from the rain embraced as lovers sharing private feelings Shadow and light are reflected off this pair seeing natures power prepare to release Each lightning flash reveals more of this couple eyes reflecting the passion of their feelings It makes one ponder lightning and thunder matched as man and woman embraced in loves power Startime 2004 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good, my friend. It's good seeing you write for us again... thank you. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, yes....great to read your words again! hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It is great to read you again. I couldn't help but see Michael and Mary in this write, bracing against their personal storm, son Chris standing nearby. I am in need of a hanky right now. Beautiful write, just hit me in the solar plexus. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Your words make the picture of events shine, The flash of lightning illuminating the lovers, and the thunder of human passion raising higher than the decibels of the storm. ...Love the way your language rolls of the tongue, a poem to read out loud .. --------ice ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a touching write dear Karen.. And it's so good to have you home. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain ~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Karen, you pen it well...all of the emotions, the brilliance of lightning, the rolling thunder that draws two lovers ever closer together...your touch has not diminished, nor will it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Indeed...the power of love can be like a storm...the intensity and the feelings that are so powerful. Good to see you posting! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Startime, I really liked this comparison and now I am going to ponder it. That is really food for thought. Beautiful poem! ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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