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Alexa's Lightning

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EagleScorpion
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since 03-08-2000
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Here, Now, Forever


0 posted 07-26-2004 06:04 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EagleScorpion

The Love you two have is contagious.

We should have talked more,
I should have touched less.

He's the best friend I have down here,

He loves you, dont hurt him.
Can we be friends?

He cries for you, I like you.

He buys you diamonds, I wont.

He loves you, I want you.

Search your heart child,
Can we be friends?

We should have talked more,
I should have touched less.

The Love you two have is contagious.

CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT!

© Copyright 2004 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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since 04-05-2003
Posts 2182
Alberta, Canada


1 posted 07-26-2004 06:44 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

Stunning vision of an honest heart....interesting thoughts are brought to light with each reading....the kind of poem one reads over and over to reveal the inner core....BRAVO!!!
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


2 posted 07-26-2004 06:50 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

"We should have talked more,
I should have touched less."

Well done...love these two lines!!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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since 12-05-2003
Posts 13488
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3 posted 07-27-2004 06:51 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Found this to be very full of deeper questions and thought provoking...almost like what wasn't said made it an even better write.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 11-11-2004 09:01 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Joe, I want to thank you for your recent comment on one of my poems, and to let you know that while I read a lot of your works, I am not always able to respond.  When you allow your talent to shine such as you have in this post, I make it a point to slow down and relish the moment.

Write on, young man.
passing shadows
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5 posted 11-13-2004 11:52 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a strong write
 
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