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Alexa's Lightning
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Alexa's Lightning |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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The Love you two have is contagious. We should have talked more, I should have touched less. He's the best friend I have down here, He loves you, dont hurt him. Can we be friends? He cries for you, I like you. He buys you diamonds, I wont. He loves you, I want you. Search your heart child, Can we be friends? We should have talked more, I should have touched less. The Love you two have is contagious. CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Stunning vision of an honest heart....interesting thoughts are brought to light with each reading....the kind of poem one reads over and over to reveal the inner core....BRAVO!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We should have talked more, I should have touched less." Well done...love these two lines!!! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Found this to be very full of deeper questions and thought provoking...almost like what wasn't said made it an even better write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joe, I want to thank you for your recent comment on one of my poems, and to let you know that while I read a lot of your works, I am not always able to respond. When you allow your talent to shine such as you have in this post, I make it a point to slow down and relish the moment. Write on, young man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a strong write |
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