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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Soaked A prune has soaked the rain of whim And filled upon the strain of grim Stuck within an egos clog Floundering within the bog It holds onto an alter tie A fraying rope of woven why Wearing on the pendulums rhyme Rasping on the wear of time Below me lies the dark abyss I hang this fraying cannabis Within the era of my space And cannot find a brace of base My voice is dry with sounds of cry And all that’s left is self deny But what would be the good of this When hanging by frayed cannabis When it tares I’ll let my core And fly or sink to evermore |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cannibis..mmmmm let me see now hanging by a hemp rope in the rain perhaps dreading the drop perhaps one should trust it all to his zippo and let his lifeline burn into a magic carpet with 727 wheels? master cy you take me into pages of old books I remember and know I never read dug it sir |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. Thought provoking images. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read as always Sy. Leaves me lots to ponder today. Well done! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yup...what my sister Enchantress said!  Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You'll fly. Just brush off those wings and plume away. Rainy day in Ohio. Hoping the sun will peak out to everyone soon. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. misc'e |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sy, your a master at weaving images to a fine tune....lovely, yet, sending hugs...thank you for the early moring read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
afternoon Sy...write well done |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 You've still got it, Seymour. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You paint quite an unusual picture of yourself ~ soaking wet and hanging from a fraying rope of cannibis that is swaying back and forth like a pendulum! ~ but you're still adorable! Kind of like Tarzan in his golden years!   EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sigh, I couldn't help but think of an inside joke on us all..   |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My voice is dry with sounds of cry And all that’s left is self deny This couplet is so striking... beautiful write! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
rock-a-bye Sy babe in the treetop your rhythmn and rhyme babe has not gone to pot although the hemp rope frays your wisdom not stalled your wonderful words seem to come when they're called Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I have nothing to add so I'll just say I echo the sentiments above |
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