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lovejunkie
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0 posted 2004-07-26 12:25 PM


Click
click
  click
Our baby's got
her first nervous twitch.

She stares at the walls
past the ceiling
to the hall.
Breathes and thinks
Breathes and chokes
Breathes and clicks

Her skin crawls
microscopic
bites
and gashes
and lashes stick together
while she tries to sleep.

Her throat closes
and holds back her food
chew
chew
  chew
How sweet.
Our baby's got
something new to do.

She cries and she
cringes.
She breathes and she
breaks.

Shake
shake
  shake
Why is it cold? and
Why can't she eat? and
Why can't she sleep
without a phone by her side?
and
Why does she have to grit her teeth so
hard until it hurts her?

She fights with the mirror
at night when
no one's home
to talk her away-
-to tuck her away.
"I hate you," she shook.
"I want to live again," she begged.

"No," it said.

Click
click
  click

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-07-26 02:14 AM


this leaves me with a chill, a foreboding

it isn't a rockabye baby write

am I misreading?

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