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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2004-07-25 11:34 AM


Taking The Edge Off


there are things
I suppose I could change
but I just don’t know
where to start
and how is it
that one can change
the current of the tide
years and tears it took
to carve the rock
of the grand canyon
and so is the edge
of me

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer
© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-07-25 11:53 AM

1slick_lady
Recognition is the fist sign of wisdom.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-07-25 12:26 PM

I think you're perfect just like you are...
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
3 posted 2004-07-25 02:13 PM

What a comparison!  Really good.  ....jo
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