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Susan
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0 posted 2004-07-25 10:08 AM


Essence of Goodness
Beauty of spirit and soul
Gallantry is shown

This is the depth of "Sir"

s.a.t.

Barry, please see my response to your piece titled "My name is not "Sir" for my perspective the word  

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Magnus
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1 posted 2004-07-25 10:10 AM


You have me smiling...a great big smile, and
for your info,  I have read your reply,  I
worried about how you would take my poem,
knowing that you often call me "Sir"....

I am most pleased to wear that title.  I do
understand your feelings of it and your
desire to do so.  

You must read my own reply to your reply...
(This is getting complicated).....

Thanx Dear "Lady"....  

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-25 10:13 AM


Your poem just goes to show that our Mag-nanimous One truly is a "Sir"!

Sending warm hugs to each of you!

Linda

Magnus
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3 posted 2004-07-25 10:23 AM


M’lady,  

Fair be thy skin, thy heart, thy soul.
Fair be thy kindness ever so bold.
Fair be thy wisdom, thy beauty seen.
Fair be thy vision, of peace serene.

Thee art a gem of sparkle and weight
A “Lady” beyond the rusted iron gate.
A woman born of a soul most rare.
Of shimmering eyes, silken hair.

And by thy own words I have read
I leave the thy liberty of “Sir” as said.

Susan
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4 posted 2004-07-25 10:28 AM


Ah, you are most kind, Sir.  What a beautiful gift you give to me in return.  My heart is warm.

  Susan

Now I'm off to play with knives (or Tools as the Master calls them).  Great big Martial Arts seminar this weekend.  Too fun!

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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5 posted 2004-07-25 02:56 PM


Susan, on occasion I have called Barry, "Sir," also....and when I read his poem, I felt that perhaps I had offended him.  My intent was the same as yours....you penned it so well.  Yes, it is that gallant heart and soul of his!  (Hope your day goes well!)   ....jo
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6 posted 2004-07-25 02:58 PM


I refer to many male poets here as "Sir", usually because they have provided a poem of such depth and feeling, that any other acknowledgement would be remiss, and lack proper respect...

Well done, Susan.

Magnus
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7 posted 2004-07-25 03:11 PM


And,  none the less....I shall...(from most
humble respect and admiration, cough cough)
call our Sun....Ma'am...on occasion or two.
Yes Ma'am,  I will,  I will.....

Magnus
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8 posted 2004-07-25 03:24 PM


Anyone that is "off to play with knives"
can call me anything their little heart
desires to call me....No questions asked..

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-07-27 12:36 PM


Enjoyed...James
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