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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-07-24 06:34 PM






~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-07-24 06:46 PM


PUURRRRRfect!  Well done Marge....
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2 posted 2004-07-24 06:53 PM


Beautiful Marge!

Eric

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3 posted 2004-07-24 07:05 PM


Oh Marge, this is just beautiful. I love the sunset.
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4 posted 2004-07-24 07:08 PM


Beautiful marge, you have a way of creating images that stay in the mind long after the words have been read.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2004-07-24 07:56 PM


There you go again, Marge, just sweeping me away in your lovely thoughts!   ....jo
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6 posted 2004-07-24 08:51 PM


Marge,

  I love your verse.  It was so pretty I had to pull my husband over to check it out.  He agreed.  You are such a special lady!
                    misc'e

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7 posted 2004-07-24 09:08 PM


Oh so beautiful.
TD

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You all are so gracious with your comments~
Thank you so very much~

This photograph was taken in Costa Rica by my sweetie pie of a steppie-sister~
LOL ... she HAD to let me use it ...
cause I loaned her my camera for the trip !!!

Miscellanea~
Aw, how sweet ... thank you & hubby~

Kethry~
Darling lady ... soooooo good to see you~

Magnus~
Thank you so much~

SweetSuzieQ~
You KNOW it's good to see you dear~
(Now answer my email !)

Jo~
Such a sweetheart you are ...~

Eric~
So very pleased to know you enjoyed it~

Kathleen~
You are a blessing dear poetess~

*Huglets* to ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2004-07-25 05:09 AM


beautiful!
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10 posted 2004-07-25 05:20 AM


my poets poet...when i breathe...it is you that exhales...love you
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2004-07-25 08:12 AM


DixieDoodleGal~
THANK YOU~
AND ... your kindness in sending a gift for Shelby defines the soft beauty of your heart~

OneSlick~
You made my day !!!
THANK YOU !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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12 posted 2004-07-25 09:19 AM


Marge, you slipped that sun ever so sweetly and sensuously into the sea.

Simply super scribing!


EO

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13 posted 2004-07-25 09:20 AM


Romantic and inspiring.  And the picture completes it.

believe in what your heart feels...

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14 posted 2004-07-25 09:33 AM


Very well done Marge... i love it as always

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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15 posted 2004-07-25 02:13 PM


I really like this one Marge. Beautiful!
Love ya,
Betty

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16 posted 2004-07-25 09:12 PM


Dear Marge:

Your poem is so touching and the scenery is gorgeous!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2004-07-29 03:17 PM


Simply stunning... both photograph and poem! *S*
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18 posted 2004-07-29 03:22 PM


ahhh, how did I miss this one? Beautifully enriching!
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