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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-07-24 01:51 PM

Empty of words...

This cloud drifts without
a verse.

Leaving nothing in its wake.

I seek to know the
sky -

And chasing clouds...I leave my
words behind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-24 02:14 PM

From my part of the world
to yours...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-24 02:15 PM

always thankful for that

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-07-24 02:23 PM

Though brief, this carries many beautiful
visions within it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-24 04:21 PM

All of your poems have a true sense of their words.....another one here, Eric.....enjoyed!

....jo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-07-25 10:30 AM

Seeking love in it's highest plane is admirable and desirable...
The lift here was certainly appreciated.
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-07-25 10:07 PM

drifting right along..............

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-07-25 10:23 PM

Eric

As always, lovely!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-07-26 09:35 AM

I like this one (when don't I, dear Poet). I often used to lay out and watch the clouds float past while words of poetry followed in their wake. Nice.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-07-26 09:48 AM

this beauty gave me chills
Very much enjoyed

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2004-07-26 10:02 AM

chasing clouds

   leaving words behind...

and very good ones at that!

         misc'e

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2004-07-26 11:39 AM

Beyond words
there is Love.
And your chasing
the clouds
is a sacred play
where your soul
captures treasures
to share ...
as you do so
beautifully!

I love you.
Margherita