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Patricia
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0 posted 2004-07-24 11:48 AM


Ode to Om

I trace this space
from thought to thought
this empty in between.
To find my light,
bring new insight
to that which goes unseen.

It is in this place,
this holy space,
I find no cause for fear.
For in my mind,
my quiet mind
the answers will appear.

Out of nothingness
from nowhere,
I draw my point of view.
From a blend of
my own colors,
I create a brand new hue.

Out of dark abyss,
I walk in bliss,
blessed that I be.
I breathe my Om,
and leave this home,
a spirit that is free.

© Copyright 2004 Patricia A. Plotz - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-24 12:30 PM


Such a peaceful rendering...
so glad to see you write again,
m'friend...

Magnus
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2 posted 2004-07-24 12:35 PM


Yes,  very glad to see you writing again,
and doing it quite well at that!  You are
growing as each day passes...Continue
please...

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-07-24 12:40 PM


Oh my how beautiful this is Patricia...
I could feel myself relaxing as I read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-24 02:41 PM


nice mood here

I need some of that

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-07-24 04:19 PM


Wonderfuly said!

Eric

iliana
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6 posted 2004-07-24 04:23 PM


Your true color shines through this poem, Patricia, and it is lovely!   ....jo
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-07-25 11:57 AM


Gosh almighty~ ~ I loved this, Patricia!

Love & Light,
EA
P.S. Try this! While lying in the bath with your face just above the water, repeatedly say "Om" ~ in a deep and resonating voice.
The water vibrates and in turns vibrates your whole body with the God sound!

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2004-07-26 09:54 PM


Patricia, thank you for this!

what a gorgeous, perfect write

Susan
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9 posted 2004-07-26 09:57 PM


Ah, transcending the known to find the truth of the essence behind the mind.  Excellent.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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