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An Open Letter, [maybe, hanky alert?]

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hoot_owl_rn
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25 posted 07-29-2004 04:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I happened to read your comments for critiques just as I was starting to reply to this piece and in answer to those two posted questions:
What pulled me in here?
I know you don't disappoint and this piece is no exception to that
What am I taking away?
Perhaps reflections about todays world and what we do/don't do just to survive in it and thoughts of how we tend in a world of communication to lose touch with those who most matter. Truth be told, no one can take away anything from this piece, it's perfect just the way it is
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise


26 posted 07-29-2004 05:04 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

This is just unbelievably fantastic! I've read and re-read it and each time more tears but some lines bring a smile.

You are a magician with words.  

Hugs, Marti

Look deep, deep into nature,
and then you will understand
everything better.
           Albert Einstein

Jeffrey Carter
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27 posted 07-29-2004 05:21 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Kari, As you know I don't always reply to everything I read here, but this is just so amazing I had to say thank you.

I lost my mom last October and this made me remember some good times (they were far and few between).

You DO have a way with words!
JL
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28 posted 07-29-2004 07:00 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Oh wow.  
Beautiful message!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


29 posted 03-24-2011 11:27 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

As I had reason to go through the archives tonight to find some gifts for some wonderful women, I found "this one" again...and I needed to come back, and thank you who came later, to share with me your thoughts.

God bless you.

God bless Ron, who gave us Passions in which to lend our thoughts, lest they be forgotten.



 
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