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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-07-24 02:53 AM


Fallen

You Came to me
Like a dream in the night
Captavating
My thoughts
Holding me
Within

Engulfed
By visions of you
Dancing
Across my mind
Hungry
For more of you

Each second
Spent with you
My love grows
Deeper, Stronger
Entangling
My Love with yours

How I long
For you
To be in your arms
You Holding me
Your Breath
Upon my skin

I want to
Feel you in body
As I do in soul
To meld
Two into One

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
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1 posted 2004-07-24 02:58 AM


nice... very nice

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-07-24 04:34 AM


Two into one.....that is the way it should be.....enjoyed.  
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-07-24 04:52 AM


A very well written longing!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

4 posted 2004-07-24 10:26 AM


enjoyed
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