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lgina
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0 posted 2004-07-24 01:18 AM



Your love warms me like the rays of sun on a fresh spring day,

The looks are as intense as the flames of a fire out of control.

The understanding is as genuine as the first kiss.

The future is white like a new fallen snow,  that eventually melts away.

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-07-24 01:35 AM


Oh, if we could only makes those moments last -- nice thoughts penned here!
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
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2 posted 2004-07-24 01:54 AM


LOving it.....keep it up

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



Martie
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3 posted 2004-07-24 11:02 AM


lgina

It's not always easy to make it last...well expressed in this poem!  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-07-24 11:44 AM


Very very nicely expressed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-07-24 02:32 PM


nice
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