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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-07-24 12:30 PM


Is She All I Ever Wanted

Oh God, dear God please help me with my heart.
She's all I ever wanted lookswise,
but is she otherwise?
I want to cry.
I want to cry.
I want to cry.
I''m so worried
about the otherwise.
Wondering how she feels for me.
Wondering if she'll ever be...
all I ever wanted.

JamesLee
July20
2004

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-07-24 01:39 AM


Oh, boy -- well, I think looks are what may attrack us at first....sometimes they can deceive (like with my ex).  Maybe, you just need to take some time to get to know her even better???  Or, maybe, you should just listen to your heart.   Best wishes, JamesLee.   .....jo
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-24 08:34 AM


Well, it appears that the flower has attracted the bee ~ now let's hope that there is honey to be made from the nectar!

A plaintif plea, James Lee! If she's as beautiful on the inside as she apparently is on the outside, then you will have hit the jackpot!

Sending you lots of lucky 7's!

Linda

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-07-24 08:41 AM


well, if this is a jelly-filled donut you're talkin about?
otherwise...

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
4 posted 2004-07-24 08:52 AM


Always a good question to ask!  Good luck to you.  Enjoyed your poem.
scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
5 posted 2004-07-24 09:06 AM


There's only one way to know the answer to this question.  Go for it..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-07-24 09:10 AM


I'm with scorpio....go for it!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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