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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-23 08:06 PM

Through It All

I find that time has gotten away from me
and those once feelings of love
have lost their meaning
somewhere in today's humidity.

My speech shadows truth
as I stand against the pane
watching the trickling of what rains
down upon my thoughts...

There, somewhere where we use to be,
where belief comes natural
and temptation was reserved for only you,
my reality of heart.

My eyes are tired, no longer able
to power the view or see the sunrise
in favorable light...a new mirror
standing before me etching what is.

Too quiet now, my arms sidelined
my road to nowhere laying ahead
and this body restless to follow
even in the rain.

I notice change, the silence of acceptance
flashing hot upon this body
and still no tears will fall
until the storm is over.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-07-23 08:11 PM

This, lady, is such a baring of soul and raw honesty.

I read and feel like I bleed for you.

Damn, woman.

and a whispered "wow"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-07-23 08:14 PM

M, this carries a lot of emotions that we
relate well to as the waters flow under our
bridges...and have for quite some time. Do
they ever slow to a trickle..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-07-23 10:18 PM

"I notice change, the silence of acceptance
flashing hot upon this body
and still no tears will fall
until the storm is over."

And one day soon, it will be...I can assure you M.
Heart Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-23 10:38 PM

You are so skilled at expressing your feelings, Maureen. This one...with the humidity and yet, not, the tears.......so good. I hope that "road to nowhere" leads to some happiness in the future.

....jo

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2004-07-23 10:40 PM

In the thunderstorm
Never quenching what is warm
Though drenching complete
In the midnight storm
Great flashes shatters the sky
Till next morning greets.

Gloom

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-07-23 11:20 PM

My heart aches with yours Maureen.
I pray for the inner peace you deserve.
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-07-23 11:22 PM

I notice change, the silence of acceptance

~*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-07-24 01:49 PM

"until the storm is over"

is it really ever?

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

9 posted 2004-07-24 06:26 PM

M,

You expressed this well....so well in fact that you will be well.

Robert

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-07-27 12:37 PM

I see the word...acceptance...your getting there...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-07-27 05:30 AM

Such depth in this.

I hope the new mirror gives life a new reflection...a new direction.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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