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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa

0 posted 2004-07-23 06:28 PM



Poet Tree

From afar I recognized her for her true self
Feeding from the darkness of deep thought
In the wilderness of lost words;
She slowly tramples on brittle, colorless leaves
Making her way to the tree at the center of my soul---
A tree of heart shaped fruit, forbidden to be eaten.
In truth, she would have it no other way
Her tongue quickly licking her lips
Of the remaining speckles of dried blood from Pandora’s soul;
So she is not intimidated by the wry smile of my soul
Who stands with a flaming sword, protecting my innocence.
But her sweet words seduce my angelic form
And she bites into ripened, bitter, red flesh---
Memories and blood gush onto sharpened white teeth
As she feeds off the world’s pain and sorrow.

Marcel

© Copyright 2004 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-07-23 06:43 PM


"As she feeds off the world's pain and sorrow"

Sounds like the incubus..

Should there be wound, then the waters of the infinite sea will heal, for no man is an island...and no woman of stone.

Applause
TD

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-07-23 06:44 PM


very nice marcel.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-07-23 07:00 PM


Excellent write...very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-07-23 07:39 PM


Wow, what a poem!  The imagery, the emotion, the way it flowed -- all great in my book.  Bravo!   .....jo
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