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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-07-23 06:04 PM



My lady, you stay against my skin,
Just like the lonely fly without a home
Searching for something to feast upon
Fluttering away at the slightest shimmer of my person.

Upon the calmness returning to my person
You sense your way back to a different part of me
This time I watch knowing your presence
Till the feeling is too much to bare you flutter again.

Am I waiting for the right moment to grasp you?
Are you the hunter turned into the hunted?
Or will you slip through my fingers once more
And flutter away this time not returning
To any place upon my person, gone.

Lee Hepworth

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-07-23 06:32 PM


Good one.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-07-23 07:27 PM


Very wonderful verse; much enjoyed reading it.  .......jo
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