navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Paint This Life
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Paint This Life Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-23 05:28 PM



Paint This Life

you are a color
that is expressed
in sunrise
and takes you past
blended to be more
yellow in height
green rainbath
layered liquid
a hue you can hold
echoing sounds
piercing your skin
multitalented brush
touching tender
fingerpainted surprise
whispered warm
hope of the day


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
marcel
Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
1 posted 2004-07-23 05:38 PM


enjoyed the fluid flow of this colorful piece!
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-07-23 06:46 PM


Sounds like a wonderful life.  A little bit of everything.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-23 07:33 PM


Wow, if I could start my day like this!  Lovely painting, Helen!
Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2004-07-26 01:56 PM


Hmmmm
A sketch of paint and painter.

I've said it before and need say it again here.
Your work must be alive!
It grows new leaves each time I read it.

e

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-07-27 03:52 AM


sweet
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
6 posted 2004-07-27 04:29 AM


"whispered warm
hope of the day"

Now that is a very nice thought!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2004-07-27 09:44 AM


day hope slices
like an orange
with the sun

mornings are the window

slick one ms

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

8 posted 2004-07-27 10:16 AM


mmm nice, I feel warm now....
Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-07-27 10:59 AM


Words painted beautifuly!

Eric

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Paint This Life

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary