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Just This
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Just This |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Just This Give me again your precious trace Swirl your essence through Over and within my soul Let me ride the wave of sensation Swim, cavort, play Then finally sink into The depths of you Let me sail over your sea of love On the winds of your sigh Feel your breath billowing Blowing, filling my sails Then flutter in the breeze Of your exhaled gasp of delight Racing the tide of your desire Then ceding you victory In the haste to feel your touch Here within this sanctuary Turning me into fluid fire Feel the rush of heat As rising up I chase your wind Gift me your soul my sweet Feed these senses which Crave the faintest hint of song That flavours your passing Let me taste the dew Sip it from your heated skin Let it slide across my tongue In a sigh of wondrous delight Lift me in to dreams sweet touch Riding on the wings Of your honeyed breath, Which bathes me Covers my soul in awe A soft vibration of desire Trembles on the lips of Oh Leaving me breathless And shaken with wonder Take me, gift me this sweetness And I’ll give you back This Just this Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A KEEPER!  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Swirl your essence through Over and within my soul Let me ride the wave of sensation Swim, cavort, play Then finally sink into The depths of you" LOVED this part, and the ending is sooo perfect.... just beautiful Mushy!!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now this shouts passion! Lovely, Marsha!  ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do we miss you? Heavens, yes! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, yes we miss your wonderful words Marsha! This is beautiful! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarlingGirl~ Softly *smiling* in deep appreciation for the REAL of you~  You turn the romantic word-wheel like no other my dear~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello love, I see you went with the original. Very good job, the rush of emotion in this is like being caught in a tsunami, very overpowering. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and that is everything. *S* Beautiful write, my friend... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Riding the waves of blue back to the top...James |
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