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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-07-23 09:59 AM


Everyday I feel
The best feeling I have ever felt
I see your smiling face
Your marching feet
Excited

Upon walking in your room
First light awake
You giggle cheeky
Wave your arms
Excited

I feed you your breakfast
See you watch your favorite show
Watch you dance to the music
You little body swaying
Excited

I wonder to myself
Just what it is your thinking
Then in a moment
Your upon me in front standing
Smiling as big as you can
Excited

I feel so lucky
Truely blessed with joy
Each time I look into your face
Every moment you smile
Excited to see me

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2004-07-23 10:04 AM


Kids!  Gotta Love 'Em!

Beautiful depiction, and it does bring back
some very warm memories for me.

Thanks for sharing this.


JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


SEA
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2 posted 2004-07-23 10:09 AM


I miss those times with my son.... it's all I can do to get him to hold my hand in public now This is wonderful and makes for big smiles
Susan
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3 posted 2004-07-23 10:14 AM


This is so heart warming.  Nothing quite like the joy of a child and the pleasure that seeps through when blessed with their beautiful smile.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-07-23 11:33 AM


children are the scope of tomorrow, not to mention great little teachers, lots of fun
a joy to be around...well, most kids....hehehhehe

Thank you for the memories you've brought me.

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