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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-23 09:26 AM


Weeping Willow

Ah!
Weeping Willow why do thee weep?
In the course
of
time you have lost your richest soils and life sustaining waters.
Your roots sliced and covered with highways
of
smothering cement and buildings of steel and concrete.

Ah!
Weeping Willow why do thee weep?
Has the sun left you with no warmth
or
has the wind turned to another with his tender loving embrace?
Your roots drenched in an undying thirst that no amount
of
polluted waters can begin to quench or sustain.

Ah!
Weeping Willow why do thee weep?
Your branches sweeping low kissing the ground
that you
so
dearly love.
The sun returning and the wind kissing your wizened
branches of delicate flowering bloom.
The rain nourishing your roots so they may grow and sink deep
into
the hardened clay.
The season of spring has once again returned.
Lift your branches high and capture the sun, wind, and the
soothing rain.
Weep no more my beautiful Weeping Willow.
Weep no more.

Love BonBon

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-07-23 09:31 AM


Bonnie,
Weeping willow, tit willow, tit willow,
has now become a piccadillo. Well done enjoyed the read.

Jes
Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
2 posted 2004-07-23 09:37 AM


Hi Bonnie

I enjoyed the read i remebered the spring once again its the best season ever.

Smile

Jes


miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2004-07-23 09:43 AM


Bonnie,
   I enjoyed this well-polished gem!  Love it!  
                misc'e

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-07-23 09:54 AM


A wonderful portrait penned here Bonnie.  I could visualize the willow tree as I read.  Excellent poetry!
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