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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-07-22 08:41 PM



Taking the truth.

It is hard at times to say
Things that no one wants to hear.

Life's short game is hard to play
Denial blinds: truth to fear

Only I, did I betray
My own lies hurt all those dear

My heart -feals- good souls don't stray
but false hopes wont make skies clear.

Saying good things I protray
hiding every one tear

Just so -I can- hear you say
All the truth and not the fear


Even in dismay
I'll take on the fear


Juju
- Trust brakes and repairs like glass-




-Juju-



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iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-22 10:42 PM


Enjoyed.....I'd rather have the truth, too, Juju.
Juju
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2 posted 2004-07-22 10:46 PM


Smiles... Yeah this was a hard poem.


Juju

marcel
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az, usa
3 posted 2004-07-23 05:35 PM


truthfully insightful!
Juju
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4 posted 2004-07-26 09:40 PM


thank you

Juju

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